Comments for LupineKing https://lupineking.com Wolf down fantasy Tue, 04 Sep 2018 20:12:16 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=4.9.8 Comment on BK IV, Chapter Twenty-two: A Stand by Eugene https://lupineking.com/bk-iv-chapter-twenty-two-a-stand/#comment-220 Tue, 04 Sep 2018 20:12:16 +0000 https://lupineking.com/?p=1802#comment-220 You have broken the chapter formating with the latest site update. Nice chapter by the way 😉

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Comment on BK II, Chapter Forty-four: Briefing by will https://lupineking.com/bk-ii-chapter-forty-four-briefing/#comment-219 Sun, 02 Sep 2018 21:54:22 +0000 https://lkwp.nfshost.com/?p=1204#comment-219 What happened to the wilderness training, also no progression shown over a span of 6 months??

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Comment on BK IV, Chapter Twenty-two: A Stand by Veeti https://lupineking.com/bk-iv-chapter-twenty-two-a-stand/#comment-218 Wed, 22 Aug 2018 13:19:01 +0000 https://lupineking.com/?p=1802#comment-218 Thanks for the new chapter! I was also wondering, how old is Valerian at this point? When the time jump occurred he was 8, and then 13, so is he now around 14? Also, in one chapter it says he is over two meters tall already… is that for real?

Also, if you need someone to edit some chapters, I’ve done that type of stuff before for other fantasy authors, and I am quite good at catching mistakes in grammar, punctuation, spelling, etc. Let me know if you still need the help!

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Comment on DC/RH BK I, CH 38: Aspirations by Panzaro https://lupineking.com/dc-rh-bk-i-ch-38-aspirations/#comment-217 Tue, 21 Aug 2018 08:35:08 +0000 https://lupineking.com/?p=1798#comment-217 That youth will die in seconds I bet, probably a lot more if they don’t book it out of there asap, nothing in that dungeon is free.

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Comment on BK IV, Chapter Twenty-two: A Stand by Angelicain https://lupineking.com/bk-iv-chapter-twenty-two-a-stand/#comment-216 Sun, 19 Aug 2018 07:21:05 +0000 https://lupineking.com/?p=1802#comment-216 This is so good I’m addicted to watching Valerian show his hand first instead of passively waiting for the others to deal with him. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

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Comment on BK IV, Chapter Twenty-two: A Stand by Jiggle https://lupineking.com/bk-iv-chapter-twenty-two-a-stand/#comment-215 Sat, 18 Aug 2018 19:14:23 +0000 https://lupineking.com/?p=1802#comment-215 That was bad ass

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Comment on BK IV, Chapter Nineteen: News Gets Around by Jiggle https://lupineking.com/bk-iv-chapter-nineteen-news-gets-around/#comment-214 Sat, 18 Aug 2018 18:55:06 +0000 https://lupineking.com/?p=1760#comment-214 How do you go to the next chapter cause it’s not in the table of contents?

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Comment on BK IV, Chapter Twenty-two: A Stand by sport102blog2017 https://lupineking.com/bk-iv-chapter-twenty-two-a-stand/#comment-213 Sat, 18 Aug 2018 01:44:24 +0000 https://lupineking.com/?p=1802#comment-213 Whoop whoop!

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Comment on BK IV, Chapter Three: Patrons and Allies by David https://lupineking.com/bk-iv-chapter-three-patrons-allies/#comment-211 Thu, 16 Aug 2018 11:46:24 +0000 https://lupineking.com/?p=1415#comment-211 Probably not the best idea to split up the info dump on how the world works. Sure, it breaks up the boring monotony. But since you’re telling us and not showing us, ive got to go back and try to remember whats been said

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Comment on BK IV, Chapter Twenty-two: A Stand by Pinchy https://lupineking.com/bk-iv-chapter-twenty-two-a-stand/#comment-210 Thu, 16 Aug 2018 08:31:07 +0000 https://lupineking.com/?p=1802#comment-210 I never expected it go this direction, I really shoud have though. That was so good! Like holy I never would have expected Valerian to take the initiative like that.

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